The Basic Essay Question (back to contents)

We found the following essay question on a recent application to an Ivy League law school. While the question varies somewhat from school to school, this is basically what you can expect:

You may wish to submit a statement or essay supplementing required application materials, which would provide the Admissions Committee with information regarding such matters as personal, family or educational background, experiences and talents of special interest, one’s reasons for applying to law school as they may relate to personal goals and professional expectations, or any other factors which you think should inform the Committee’s evaluation of your candidacy for admission. Such a statement should be submitted with the application materials.

However, most law school applications don’t even give you that much. The most common “question” we found was a simple line that said “Personal Statement,” followed by a fearsome blank space, leaving content and direction wide open. At the other extreme, one school offered this as a topic:

“Restriction of free thought and free speech is the most dangerous of all subversions. It is the one un-American act that could easily defeat us.”— William O. Douglas

Respond.

Regardless of the essay topic, there are a few essential ingredients to a successful essay. First, the introduction must be compelling; it’s the most important part. A good first impression makes the reader want to keep reading.

Second, because most applications officers spend six to eight minutes evaluating your essay, you need a strong finish—one they will remember.

If you accomplish these two tasks, the reader is going to pay more attention to your essay—and that’s good news and bad news. The bad news: he’ll be more likely to find errors or typos (of which there should be none). The good news: you’ve got a great opportunity to make a personal connection with someone deciding your law school fate.

One law school admissions officer noted that dull, unmotivated personal statements work directly against the applicant. A bad personal statement can indicate a cavalier attitude, and even applicants with high LSAT scores and high GPA’s have been denied because of a bad essay.

The University of Kentucky College of Law has one of the best web sites we’ve seen, with straightforward advice about the personal statement that’s appropriate for any application. Some of the points are

  • Writing skills are the key to success as a law student. Your readers will expect a well-edited, well-composed essay.
  • While you’ll probably write your essay in the first person, avoid starting every sentence with “I.”
  • Your reader is most likely a 50-year-old law professor who is not amused by gimmicks. Don’t use any. He or she will be more impressed by strong, declarative sentences, well-structured paragraphs, and an interesting topic.
  • But, that’s not to say that your essay should be lifeless. Remember, you’re trying to stand out in a positive sense.

Finally, if you have a choice of questions, go for the one that best suits you and the school to which you’re applying. All law schools are not alike. When you applied to undergraduate universities, you may have written one essay and used it on eight applications. For law school, expect to write several essays. Yes, it’s a lot more work, but if you’re a borderline student, a unique essay that addresses the individual school can make a big difference in the admission decision.

For more, see http://www.uky.edu/Law/admissions/pers_st.htm.

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